Where's the Poem?
It's not in the horizon that impedesperception as I take my evening stroll.I see it in that single ray that bleedsthrough dying light-like tears can soak the soul.It doesn't live in merry nuptial...
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M--I approve the sentiment, & partricularly, the penultimate line -- but the eighth line seems a bit rushed. "Just standard themes to make exploited art" is kinda crushed together, & dependent...
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Not the sort of response that's directly called for, but I dug this out again just the other day:I always say: You cant draw me, unlessthe pen responds directly to your eyes.I always say: You must...
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Museeker,You have managed to capture the poet's dilemma very well here. I really like this sonnet, especially the image at the end of the first quatrain. That one really touched me.Some suggestions:I...
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Museeker, I don't know if it's considered bad manners to speak up only to say "me too," but just wanted you to know I think you did a fantastic job here, as always. It must bring great personal...
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Mike,Thanks for the huzzah. I'll have to stand pat on L8-works okay for me. As usual, your crits and suggestions are very much appreciated.Peter,Enjoyed your sonnet...I see why mine brought it to...
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I like this very much, Museeker. A difficult thing to describe, the poetic impulse. Your sonnet brings to mind a poem by Robert Penn Warren entitled The Corner Of The Eye. It begins like this:The poem...
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